i fell in love
right there, while we stood in the bathroom together brushing our teeth i saw a lifetime of mornings each day better than the day before i felt real, true love he spat, i spat we brushed i fell in love it was clear to me as clear as anything has ever been i talked to God about him my spirit knew my soul felt the destined connection God said, "it's him" my heart is pounding my mind is racing as i try not to swallow a mouth full of fluoride my eyes smiled at him while i watched him brush his teeth, tongue and gums he looked back at me with the same exact vibe i spat, he spat we brushed i thought should i tell him right now? over this white sink full of our saliva mixed with Crest Pro-Health Advanced toothpaste that i’ve fallen in love with you that you’re the one for me that I want to be with you for a lifetime and the next… he spat, i spat he handed me the mint waxed dental floss, and I snapped off a length i handed the floss back to him, and he did the same and we flossed we Reach have we reached? i thought should i tell him first? should i wait? i really wanted him to tell me first does it really matter? yes. no. maybe… yes. what was i going to do? when is it the right time? we finished flossing and gargled with Listerine Total Care mouthwash i spat, he spat he rinsed the sink then he gazed at me for a few seconds leaned in to kiss me and said with a slightly nervous yet assured breath i’m in love with you…
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Handwritten short review by legendary poet, writer, commentator, activist, and educator Nikki Giovanni for "Just My Thoughts: Mind, Body & Soul"
"It's not a #1 record but Just My Thoughts: Mind, Body & Soul catches the times of the heart and minds. Thank you so very much for sharing with me."
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THIS is why I'm NOT stopping! Celebrated ICON, poet, memoirist, educator, dramatist, producer, actress, historian, filmmaker, and civil rights activist Dr. Maya Angelou acknowledged receiving my book with this kind card!
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